One Added Pass

I knew from the previous post that I hadn't quite gotten what I was after but I as so excited I posted all the previous steps earlier this morning.

I looked carefully and decided to pump up the darks and the lights one more time
Here is what the palette looked like for his step  ....

Just one dark value and one mid-tone added carefully. I stayed with the original value plan. The steps were all in place.
Oh gosh I hope this makes sense.